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I just tried making my own spell but... I'm guessing its either going to take more time or it just didn't work...
now I will admit that I haven't seen results from any of the spells I've ever tried, (granted that I've only been doing this for about two weeks)
but the last spell that I just tried I wrote myself and worded it like this:

"Spirits of the skies above and the winds around, grant me this wish so happiness may be found, darken the sky until there is light no more, cultivate these clouds until a blanket can be sure, at my word may they be gone, and the winds themselves be as timid as a fawn, so mote it be."

I'm not completely sure if my concentration was up to par, or if I completely believed in it to work (since I haven't really seen results from anything else...)

but sadly... I didn't see any results, any ideas?
Thanks