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by: Nex on Jan 03, 2009

The echoes of cosmos

Thru the darkest of abbys
From the cold stars in desolate space
All they way to home of ours
Streches they blackness
Gapes thy void..
And silent cosmic echo thunder the heart
As khaos burns all
Thy judge with no moral yet most rightness
Thy mind shatter and thy soul free
Thru End rides a horse of sorrow
And emptiness fills the fullness the universe
Madness runs far to mind of all
By empty harmony thy slaughter gains a rhythm
As long forgotten giants raise
Comes thy chaos
It will consume
All but emptiness
For he cant consume himself
Universal jaws open and devouring itself
Such is nature of khaos
Strecht thy infinity to darkness of soul
For it is universe itself
Discharged..destructed..all thats left it
Khaos and all that ever was
Khaos.

it was made as poem but it sound bit as lyricks...i am not much of a poet..
Any comments?