Spell...any comments?

Hi everyone...
Although I have not tried this yet, would anyone please make a comment ?

(name) I cast a spell on thee, for your heart to love only me, for thy mind to think only of me, and for thy body to yearn and lust only mine, with all thy heart and soul...thy body and mind, to last until I unbind thee, or until this lifetime of mine.

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It really only matters if you personally believe the spell you created will work. You have to put your energy into it.

Thank you Urlic...
I would thank you more if there is anything you might want to comment in the construction of the spell?

These are the words, but what is the rest? A spell is more than prose.

That being said, the words are well put together, albeit stalkerish.

Thank you for the comment...still working on it but I would appreciate inputs from someone knowledgeable like you...

Two points come to mind the main one being that this spell obviously involves infringing on their free will as your in essence commanding them to only love you. I think the human spirit figuratively and literally speaking is stronger than some give it credit for so even if you were willing to take on the consequences of such a spell I'm not sure if it would work. The second point is even though I know what you mean and as the caster you would the phrase "until this lifetime of mine" doesn't quite make sense sentence wise. To be coherent you would have to add the word ends to finish it which I know doesn't rhyme but neither does mind and mine truly though it does flow well. Looking at this, ignoring the moral parts, it flows well, invokes the right picture of your desires, etc... so it sounds ok to me. Without tools it will take more effort but I feel items are simply means to channel your energy more easily, so such a spell could work without them though if your new to magick it might be more helpful to use tools if only candles.

Hi NimirRaj...
Thank you for that...
How about this?

(name) I cast a spell on thee, for your heart to love only me, for thy mind to think only of me, and for thy body to yearn and lust only mine, with all thy heart and soul...thy body and mind, to last until I unbind thee, to last thru thy lifetime and mine.
So mote it be.

It gets the point across, however I'd be careful in how you're wording it. You are asking for an obsession as you've made no room for anyone else in their lives. Parents, friends, children, associates, work, school, etc. have been removed from the equation on the focus is on only you.

That may not be exactly what you mean, but if you are going to use words to help work magic, you need to really pay attention to what you say versus what you mean.

Hi ConjureLady...
You're right...but how do I word it as such?

Sounds good though ConjureLady definitely pointed out something that I never considered. Normal obsession can lead a person down a bad path and avoiding that makes the wording tricky. Instead of an obsession based spell you need to create more of an attraction spell.