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hi never released nay of the things that i have wrote but here is one please tell me what you think good or bad comments i odnt mind we learn from our mistakes so critisicm is wanted

As i stand alone in this world
And think of what is to come
So many people that walk by
Not knowing what is to come
So many deaths have come to past
Yet so many deaths are still to come
Oh how i stand alone in this world
To sad to talk
To happy to cry
Yet the pain i have had has made me see
That although i stand alone
There are other people that stand with me

again you can say anything you want

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its good
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Post # 3
again say what you want

To stand tall on a mountain
And feel the wind that blows
To be exposed to the water
And the heat of a fire
For a man to walk with the elements
To be peaceful all his life
To be able to understand this place
And know the meaning of life
For the man has lived for many days
Standing tall and exposed
Yet he is able to walk so many miles
To find his way back home
This man i speak of is so old yet so young
For you see he is inside of us
Waiting for the day
When wars and fights do not exists
And people can just walk along
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Post # 4
i am better with short poems. not very good with long poems.



-Nash-
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Post # 5
Really good poems
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Post # 6
I really like them
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Post # 7
go polki hehehe
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as the sun starts to set in the darkening sky
thoughts are running through my head
as the darkness nears i begin to panic
for what lurks in the dark scares me
yet i know that i am strong and the world needs my help
but i am just a young kid
a new person to this world
but what i realise is that its me
who must cure the world of evil and pain
yet i sit here in the darkness weeping in pain
for i am just a kid
being sacrificed to heal others pains
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Post # 9
when the darkness comes... the light fades... but there well owes be a little light left.


People are only evil if they have power...


Life is death, but death is death.



-Nash-
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As long as there is any form of light it can grow again to a even flame, death is not just death, it is peace and beauty once it is embraced.
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