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The echoes of cosmos

Thru the darkest of abbys
From the cold stars in desolate space
All they way to home of ours
Streches they blackness
Gapes thy void..
And silent cosmic echo thunder the heart
As khaos burns all
Thy judge with no moral yet most rightness
Thy mind shatter and thy soul free
Thru End rides a horse of sorrow
And emptiness fills the fullness the universe
Madness runs far to mind of all
By empty harmony thy slaughter gains a rhythm
As long forgotten giants raise
Comes thy chaos
It will consume
All but emptiness
For he cant consume himself
Universal jaws open and devouring itself
Such is nature of khaos
Strecht thy infinity to darkness of soul
For it is universe itself
Discharged..destructed..all thats left it
Khaos and all that ever was
Khaos.

it was made as poem but it sound bit as lyricks...i am not much of a poet..
Any comments?
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wow, what a nice piece, Kao is doing backflips and laughing funny after reading that... you always manage to make things sound so out of place yet so in place at the same time.
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Post # 3
I LOVE IT!!!this is the shiz ;)
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very good,you should try with hip-hop Im doing it I already have 8 songs.LOL
But you didn t say nothing about Satanael :-(
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Post # 5
I am glad you like it..i have another one since you like this one..

I call it eternity.

Escape of sanity!Running to myself!
Thru windows of shattered glass
Flees my sanity
So long has it plagued me
So long cursed me with ego
No longer i care for people
My limitations broken
Flee Flee sanity
for you brought but pain
I choked in life
I was blinded by light
Fooled by holyness
Now with no eyes i look on
this barren world
A desolted place
Full of flesh yet little spirits
Thy khoas roams in me
filling me with emptiness
Even blind i can now truly see universe
All is shatterd as black sun raises
To burn all ego all society
The screams of stupid and ignorant echo
But soon forgotten as drop of water in lake
Those empty linger in this desert world
To fill it with all.
The breeze is light..time broken and
i finaly free.
No sanity is within me no longer.
All is broken as it should be.
Evolution within emptiness..
Dark and cold winds blew within in union
With heat of this desert world
I am nothing but myself and myself but nothing.
Harmony achieved.
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Post # 6
Nice work Nex ;)
Wonderful. Love both!!
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This is about dream i had.Dedicated to Faith.


In the forest of shadows
Where the unknown whispers echo
thru trees of malice
Under midnight sun
I awaken from eternal sleep
Fleshless..terrible yet somehow
graceful figure
Long lost warrior of End
The light rays of darkness shinned upon
My unholiness..
I crawled and could not walk on wormed
Rotten ground
Rotten like betrayal i lived
Soon under moon of hope
It revealed a beautiful girl
Naked..and pure..
She was pale as moon and fragile like glass
Standing on ice as snow felt
A queen of snow..
The whisper of trees echoed stronger..
I risen and begun walking to that
beautiful horror..so evil so pretty.
As she saw me she smiled mysticaly
and begun to slowly run
I followed as much as i could
Crippled by pain and despair
Soon we came to fields of sorrow
Where reapers grow food for dead..
As we enclosed to each other the
trecherous moon revealed me
Soon seeds to fear
begun to grow in her eyes
And thru my rage and hunger
my harvest of fear begun
She runned in snow
with beautiful screams
I laughed as i soon hunger
made me run like wind
With darkness in my eyes
We reached the cliff which falls into endless sea
As i enclosed preparing for my feast
She slayed me with dagger of her empty heart
As i fallen i risen again
Then i was pushed into endless sea
By queen of snow
The beautiful girl
The rain of emptiness fell eternaly.
Thy end.
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YES! ;) I feel so special!!
Now Nex... THAT is something...! hehe^^
Absolutely love it!
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;)
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Post # 10
Heres another one for all angels out there ;)

Angels


With music of tears
Fly thy children of silence into
skys of eternal rain
The light within light
Shatters like glass
In sight of winged ones
Sorrow covers the sun
And greyness penetrates
into soul of winged ones
Thy echos of despair
Sing the song of sorrow
As hope lies in coffin
of ilumination..
The dance of heavens
Become the weaping of angels
A dance of loniness
Thru gates of holy kingdom open
And rivers of blood flow
All come from tears of winged ones
Embrace thy chill..forsake thy fears
And falled in depth
Depth..the core of world
Upon roots of tree
Tree of life
Where the End dwells
And raise as new and empty
Thy angels of death
No longer lingering within light
And new life is upon you
One without pain
One that is empty and full
Life of grimm.
Reap thy harvest of eternity
And listen to whisper of rain
As the light
Of End shines
Upon you.



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