Creepy poem

The day that we met
so dark and cold

the thoughts in my head
so sad - must not be told

the screams of love
which has passed away

clouds from above
darkest time has come
still no time to pray

voices of death
calling my name

creeps from behind
what has my life became?

creeps from beneth
am i destined to live?

creeps from my left
i have sins to admit

creeps from my right
my soul is not in my sight


Shiver up my spine
this is the end
no point to act good
no point to pretend
endless suffer
endless screams
i hope i'm walking in dreams!

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Very good Brim, i feel that poem for now. But it may change =)

Hopefully midge!!!
Good person deserves a good life!
And you definetly qualify for the best persons of the world!
So i wish your life would change in a good way!

Sometimes i sleep,
sometimes i reap.
Some may fear me,
some are glad.

You can see me,
when your time comes,
i'll come for you,
with my scythe,
i'll reap you next to sound of drums.

When your time comes,
you cannot hide,
you cannot run,
the reaping has begun!

you've heard my name,
you know my job.
once you see the body slim,
you know it's your time
for you has come the Grim!

Have you ever thought of writing lyrics, your good!!!

Yes!
I write and sing it too!
But i really haven't done much work on the music making programs yet so i stink at making music...i've been told i have a good voice...but that alone won't help me! LOL...i don't even want a singer career! To much attention freaks me out! I'd go berserk on the media! LOL

Brim all I can say is "BRAVO, BRAVO"

Your doing good, keep up the good work. Proud of you, you've come a long way to get here =)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH...Midgey!
Allways so sweet...those words are the thing that got me so far =D
Thanks to everyone here...especially you Midge!
Again...thank you all!

You will always have a friend in me, you know where I am if you need me =)

Diddo =D