spells gone wrong

thank you white and Earth, both of you 100% correct on the last one. You two can answer this one, or you can take a break from this one, and let someone else take a stab at it.

Next one- what's wrong here?

DARK ONE CURSE`

SINGLE BLACK CANDLE
SALT CRYSTAL
CUP OF DIRT
SINGLE MATCH
PEICE OF HAIR FROM VICTEM

TO MAKE SOMEONE FEEL WORTHLESS

lite candle then place crystal in center of floor chant '' strip thy of all apeall '' throw dirt on crystal make thy feel what should not feel'' lite dirt on fire now make thy cold as stone'' make thy feel all alone'' place hair in fire

1. Never use your blood when placing a curse or hex on someone.

2. At 9 needles you hurt them but at 10 you kill. That does not make a lot of sense.

3. How does someone chat a spell?

4. The spell is written very sloppy; it has missing letters and words.

5. The incantation is telling the entity to destroy the target but the needles allow you to only hurt the target. Which is it? You cannot have it both ways.

6. I am unclear on the use of the soil, it serves no purpose.

7. What does the person casting do with the jar once the spell is complete?

8. One would be very unwise to Demand or command any task to a higher entity. Always ask for their assistance or guidance.

9. Repeating So mote it be 3 times is excessive, once is sufficient.

10. There are no preparatory instructions to protect the person casting.
On th upside, the person who submitted this spell was experienced enough to know to place a caution with it. Kudos for that fact.

I thought black candles were used to draw out negative energies, and proticion not to curse. How do u lite dirt on fire. Where do u put the candle. The chant is all over the place were u cant really tell from the directions from the chant. Which fire do u put the hair the candle or the dirt fire.

boy am I really confused on all of these spells for one thing what are we trying to accomplish and who for? I can see the protection one but the others have no sense for being here. I use majick to bring things of need and those I love need into my life. I always prepare for a spell and write my own. But I have never known that neatness counts. I Thought that if you use the proper ingredients and it came from your heart and heart was true the spell shall be. Although I have cast a few that I guess I really didn't mean too and they didn't go so well