Success Spell

Earth, Air, Water, Fire
Work ________ unto my desire
Make success come to me
So mote it be.

What do you guys think of my first written spell? Thanks!

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very simple and to the point. I like this, just a suggestion why not take something to represent each of the elements and use these as well. You could sprinkle a pinch of soil (to represent the earth) light a stick of incense (for air) light a candle(for fire) and sprinkle some water (for water) im sure the elements would be very honoured by this. well done for a first time

Thanks@.@ I like your suggestions:) Earth: allspice, Air: feather, Fire: green candle, Water: cup of water.