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So... I made a little spell or ritual, please explain which it is for me, thanks! And um, I wanted some feedback? Is there anything else you think I could use? Such as a symbol for my candles, maybe burn a piece of paper, ect.? This will probably be my first spell, and yes, I have a backup plan should it backfire. But yah, any suggestions?

So, I shall start the spell/ritual! Again, explain which it is? I belive it is a ritual, because I'm casting a circle and whatnot... but I could be wrong(:

"Hail, great Guardians of the East, Autocrat Air. You breathe life into us from the very first moments after birth until we return to the Earth. Guide me now with your un-imaginable intelligence as I cast forth my spell. *light candle*
Hail, great Guardians of the South, Pharaoh Fire. You keep us warm on our coldest days, and light our ways on our darkest nights. Keep me protected with your great strength as I work magick. *light candle*
Hail, great Guardians of the West, Countess Water. Without you, all life would cease to exist. You keep us moving and smiling. Guide me now with your amazing wisdom as I ask for protection. *light candle*
Hail, great Guardians of the North, Emperor Earth. From you, we are born. And to you, we shall return. You keep us steady and nurse us throughout our days. Protect me with your magickal instincts as I show my true desires. *light candle*
Hail, great Guardians of All, Sovereign Spirit. All life, essence, is pointless without you. You exist in everything, and nothing. Keep my intentions pure throughout this night's practice." *light candle*

"O, Great Goddess, I call to thee,
help keep negative energies from getting to me.
Let your Fire keep me faithful,
let your Water keep me wise,
may your Earth keep me stready,
and your Air open my eyes.
Keep me protected in your loving hand,
whether I lay, sit, or stand.
And keep this protection hidden deep inside,
this beautiful necklace, I have provided.

So mote it be, and Blessed Be."

And then I dismiss the elements and whatnot. I plan on offering something to the elements and Goddess for their service, though I'm not sure what yet. So yah. By the way, if it helps, I'm "enchanting" so to speak, my pentacle necklace, to protect me. Any feedback? What so ever?