My first spell

This is my first attempt at witing a spell. Do you think this will work? can you give me some feedback?

Love spell

One white rose with the stem removed
One bowl of spring water
One red candle

Float the rose in the centre of the bowl of water. Light the candle. Recite the spell, while visualising the target. Warning: this is a powerful spell that blocks all counter spells and does not fade. Be careful while using this as it also binds the user of the spell to the one it is aimed at. Not only does this spell not fade, but it grows in power over time so use with extreme caution.
Purity of water;
Power of fire;
Beauty of the rose;
The lust of red;

As your beauty binds me;
May this flame;
Melt this wax;
To seal this deed;
Because from Hereon in;
We are bound together;
(Drip wax on rose)

With each other;
‘Till the end of time;
With each other;
‘Till the light and darkness combine;

With each other;
‘Till East and West are one;
With each other;
After all else has gone;

Let no spell counter this;
And let none of our love go astray;
And our desire for one another;
Shall grow with each passing day;

From light, the darkness comes;
(Blow out candle)
And the deed is done;

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it seems pretty good, and spells work bets if you write them

wow pretty intense words if this works for u. but be careful what u r asking. love spells are not always the answer and may not always have the desired results even though u may think this is what u want at the time. do not cast a love spell without careful thought and be sure the words express your true desire and be sure you fully understand what could happen if the spell does not work properly. if u have any questions please just pm me

Thats a very strong spell i commend you at writing this spell it's extremely good in my opinion, just reading the way you worded it gave me chills.

Congrats!

wow, i wish i could write My own spells:(
thats very good..

Careful, I made a spell, now people always ask what they did wrong or if it works. You'll need a lot of patience.

Realy good 5/6 It will work.

only if you belive it will if not then no it will not when you use the spell feel the magic mover throw you body mind and soul the let it go

i have not been able to cast a spell yet. :(

"Warning: this is a powerful spell that blocks all counter spells and does not fade. Be careful while using this as it also binds the user of the spell to the one it is aimed at. Not only does this spell not fade, but it grows in power over time so use with extreme caution. "

If you haven't even tried this yet, how can you caution anyone in this way? I'm really not meaning to criticize, but if you're coming here asking us if we think it'll work, do you really think it's appropriate to tell us what exactly it will do? You don't even know if it'll work or not, much less if it will "grow in power over time" or "not fade".
I mean no disrespect, and I understand that if this is what you're trying to achieve that you feel it should be included, but maybe just as a side note, and not as anything that could be possibly taken as a legitimate warning.