Creepy poem

what's that sound i hear
comming from afar?
it's a voice of a girl
she's singing - how bizzare!

nothing here but graves and sorrow
everything taken away nothing good left
not even the shadows who commited this theft?

still you sing a happy song
still your feelings seem so strong
do you not know sadness
are you not touched by blackness?

everyone's dead
she said
where is the sadness?
where is the blackness?

there's no more wars
there's no more pain
why cry and feel bad?
that's all in vain!

we're all happy
we got each other!
no more fights betwen us
we are all closer!

i look in her eyes
so much joy no more cries
she dances around
as i sit down relaxed and astound

it's over
what's done is done
all that's left are joy and fun!

WOW
Really awesome job!
I'm a poet too...
But i don't write
sad poems or dark
I'm more of a positive and optimistic nature!

Another good poem Brim. Sadness may end in our lives one day as you tell us about. But for this time being, we all have tears of sadness and grief. Hopefully sadness will be a memory in the past. Some may never feel the darkness but some have. You have touched the heart of people who know of both.

Yes midge...
Sadness will probably not follow us into the grave!
Sadness and sorrow are just a big parts of our lifes!
Some may have it less some may have it more!
But i surely hope that it will end some day!
For all of us!

The end of what, thats the question?...........

Will the darkness take the unfortunate to the grave or will happiness save them and make them smile through life.

It depends on the strong or the weak!!

Wow Midge and B/S, you guys share lots of feelings
You two look like a good example of a very strong bond
Either you guys are in love, or you are very good friends!

LOL we are just good friends. I think we have been friends since the start of B/S's journey in magik.

But he has done me proud over this time with these great poems. I really hope he keeps them going, so i can add my bit to it aswell =)

Heehee
LOL...yes!...we are good friends!
Midge has been my friend since i tightened my shoes laces for the great path through magic! She has shown me the true magic and true friendship!
I hope someday i can return the favour!

I know one day I will need you, but i don't give to get!!

Friendship is one of the precious things in life.

Well it is to me......

It should be to everyone...then the world would be a better place for me for you and for everyone!
I keep my friends close as a starving dog a jucy stake! XD LOL...
There's just no way i could live without my friends...sure there are ups and downs but that's what friendship is al about!
Helping, forgiving, loving and hanging out! But the main thing is that we're having a blast!